Each week in my writing classes I have my students write a short journal at the end of the class. I realized that I have never posted an actual journal writing from one of my students so I decided to include one of the better ones here. Read on if you dare! :)
"In a dark-pitched night, the moon loomed behind the clouds, the silvery moonlight reflected a long lonely shadow of a middle-age man. He dragged his weary legs, trudging along the narrow alley with a depressed and painful look on his face. He stopped and leaned against a road lamp, it released a dim orange colored light. Suddenly the lamp 'bizz' and broken, left the night in a complete black. He sighed and walked foreward, his shadow followed him constantly. He had no intention to go home or anywhere there had a crowd. Alone was all he wanted. In the distance, a lush forest surrounded this old town, he quickened his steps to embrace the nature, where had a wild space to hide his secret and desperation."This journal was written by Cinderella and I didn't change anything from her original writing. Pretty good, huh? Actually, some of the other students wrote stories that were more scary and suspenseful but I loved the description in Cinderella's writing.
Hope you had a great Halloween!
1 comment:
That journal was pretty darn good! Probably better than I could do. =) Happy Halloween, Shan!
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